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So I'm not quite sure just
exactly what it is about you
that makes you so enticing,

You've got this way about you;
the way you walk and
the way you talk
it strips me of my ability
to simply resist


And so I do my best to
impress you
and
undress you

But despite my best attempts
you evade me
so elegantly


Maybe I swag off when
I'm talking to you
and I talk
a big game
and I
shoot game
and you're
just too good for that,

Well I may tilt my hat
differently
when you come
around

And I may walk
with a lean
and my steez
may change


But it's all just to show you;
in hopes of just
having you

I can't help but
show up
all the boys
and show off
all my toys

just to have you on my arm
:iconroyalocean:
Dubstep inspires some crazy shit in me.

Written while listening to Do You@ Free Land -Panty Raid Music / Ooah
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:iconairlux27:
This poem describes "you" as I read it i think!!! Good writing....!
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:iconroyalocean:
*royalocean Sep 10, 2009  Professional Writer
Thank you!
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:iconairlux27:
Thank YOU, I'm new....!
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:iconairlux27:
This poem describes "you" as I read it i think!!! Good writing....!
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~Melkyrion Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
you know, this is a really good poem. u ever tried going out somewhere where there is no roads or any human things in sight and sit on a hill just looking out? u should try it, ive gotten alot of inspiration from doing so at times:-)
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*royalocean Sep 10, 2009  Professional Writer
Oh I know, nature is always the great inspirer(I wish that was a word!). I've drawn a lot of inspiration from being secluded away from everything. It's always so quiet, I love it.
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~Melkyrion Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
well if u do a google map search for 9446 Grov, you should find the secluded place i originally came from:-) much more *inthebush* you wont rly find
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!Lindzgal Sep 10, 2009   Writer
you've got some great poetry in here.

this ones cool...keep on writing!! You are good at it!

Linda
ps thanks for faving my "A Way with Words"
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*royalocean Sep 10, 2009  Professional Writer
Thanks a ton, it is very much appreciated!

You're very welcome, it was a wonderful piece that I rather enjoyed.
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